Great story angle and good start here. Two questions I have to help keep you thinking about your draft: how long should your lede be? Should this type of lede be attributed or not?
I really like this blog because it is very specific. It's written in an active voice which is good. If I read this in a news story, I would be immediately hooked. This does make me rethink my lede a little bit. I would probably be more specific is my lede.
I like this angle of the story as well since I definitely have this problem! Is it about spending too much on drinking or just too much in general though?
Interesting angle, I like your lede a lot, but I would like to know where you got your information, I think that's something readers would be interested in
I liked this one! I did not even think of how much money students spend on weekends alone going out to the bars. This definitley hits home at Towson, and would make me want to read further.
this one is really good. it sounds like an interesting topic too. very relatable and gives a new vision on what college kids are actually spending most of their money on, besides books.
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Great story angle and good start here. Two questions I have to help keep you thinking about your draft: how long should your lede be? Should this type of lede be attributed or not?
I really like this blog because it is very specific. It's written in an active voice which is good. If I read this in a news story, I would be immediately hooked. This does make me rethink my lede a little bit. I would probably be more specific is my lede.
I like this angle of the story as well since I definitely have this problem! Is it about spending too much on drinking or just too much in general though?
Interesting angle, I like your lede a lot, but I would like to know where you got your information, I think that's something readers would be interested in
I liked this one! I did not even think of how much money students spend on weekends alone going out to the bars. This definitley hits home at Towson, and would make me want to read further.
this one is really good. it sounds like an interesting topic too. very relatable and gives a new vision on what college kids are actually spending most of their money on, besides books.
Sounds really good.. makes me want to read more! thats so true
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