Monday, April 21, 2008
Sen. Barack Obama (D-Ill.) pauses during a town hall meeting in Reading, Penn. He and Hilary Clinton (D-N.Y.) have been campaigning in preparation for for the presidential primary scheduled on Tuesday, April 22, 2008. (Reuters photo by Bradley Bower/April 20, 2008)
Wednesday, April 16, 2008
Teach For America
Here's the link to my story. Enjoy!
Tuesday, April 8, 2008
Picture Post!
This picture tells a story. It's my little brother (not so little anymore, he's 17 now) on our cousin's boat in Sicily. It was our first time on the Mediterranean Sea. Woo hoo!
This picture doesn't really tell a story, but it's pretty! This is from the balcony of my aunt and uncle's home in Palermo (I'm related to about 75% of the people in the distance!) ;)
This picture fills the frame. It touches two points in the picture (rule of thirds). This is from our family cemetery in Sicily.
This is an example of a picture that doesn't fill the frame. It's a pretty flower, but there is a lot of awkward space around it and the most attractive parts don't follow the rule of three lines.
Action! This was me on the day of Alpha Xi Delta's Big/Little Reveal last semester! This is me trying to quickly put together a puzzle with my big's number on it.
One huge pile of puzzle pieces + 27 girls = forever to finish!
No action, but really funny. My friend did this to my car while I was still in class. This was from my senior year of high school. LOL
Candid. This is Will Pugh, the lead singer of Cartel (one of my favorite bands). This was from my first time seeing them. :-D
Not candid. I didn't take this one (obviously), but these girls are my life! I've been a fan since 4th grade and I saw them for the first and last time on February 24th. It was their second to last show.
Best. Night. Ever.
Monday, April 7, 2008
Feature story progress
Wednesday, April 2, 2008
Crime Story Reporting
(2) Campus police are reticent to talk, but they released a press release last night stating that three guns and two pipe bombs were found in a student's dorm room, along with a scrapbook of newspaper clippings describing in detail how the Virginia Tech shootings were carried out. They suspect the student had similiar plans and say they are relieved to have discovered the plot before anyone got hurt. The Towerlight editor has assigned you to cover the story.
First of all, I'd try to get all of the information that I can, especially the bulleted items from Chapter 13. So far, there are no victims so that's out. I'd need to get the status of the investigation (suspects, charges, etc). If someone has been charged, I'd get all of their basic information, and if a single person has not been identified, I'd need to get any details on that person. For this specific case, I really want to know what dorm complex this student lives in, his/her major, hometown, and any significant history.
The most important thing to get (in my opinion) are the details of the crime. Everyone loves drama!
In this scenario, the police aren't talking very much, and Towson isn't looking for bad PR. Getting them to cough up the good stuff is going to be a challenge, but they aren't the only people I can go to. The Housing and Residence Life Staff (RA's, CC Workers, etc) are sure to know details as well.
I think some cool media components could include an interactive video on what exactly a pipe bomb is, because I don't even know and I'm the one who is covering the story. I also think that it would be good to publish some safety tips for college students.
Interview...ugh
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
Washington Post Field Trip
My trip to the Washington Post was SO great! About three hours, we sat in a conference with Rob Curley, the Vice President of Product Development. In most situations, sitting and listening to someone talk for that amount of time would put me to sleep. This time, however, it did the exact opposite. I was so intrigued by everything Rob was talking about. He gave us an overview of the Washington Post, washingtonpost.com, news websites from his hometown, and so much more.
We also talked about the future of news and technology, and how the two have already met and are growing side by side. Rob stressed the importance of news being available on cell phones – especially the iPhone. He strongly believes (and knows) that in a matter of time, everyone is going to have a phone with this kind of style. The Post has already recognized this and has made changes to their website. They have made their website iPhone-friendly, unlike some newssites that aren’t easily read on small screens.
One of my favorite features from the Post’s website is their dining guide. After a little bit of typing and the click of a mouse, sushi places that are open at midnight appear right before your eyes. I think something like this should be created for the Towson area.
We also got a tour of the Washington Post offices as well as the washingtonpost.com offices. The Post is very typical, and it looks like it popped out of All the President’s Men. The website’s offices are completely different. The 4 levels look a lot like a Real World house! It was totally modern and I loved it.
Annie, Danielle, and I are very inspired to start our own blog-type of website for TU students. There is so much that we’re missing out on and we’ve got big plans to change it. ;-)
Feature Story - Teach for America
For my feature story, I want to write about Teach for America. As soon as I heard about it in class, I thought it was such a great program. In fact, it’s something that I’d even be interested in doing.
According to the website, Teach for America’s main goal is to eliminate the lack of education by hiring top college graduates. They don’t just take everyone; it is a very selective program and those who are interested must be highly qualified to get a position.
There are currently about 5,000 “corps members” who work in 26 urban and rural areas. Each of these 5,000 people went through the application process and come from diverse backgrounds.
I can’t wait to meet a teacher for this program. It sounds so wonderful and by the sound of it, these people are great! J
Proofreading
Honestly, I really enjoy proofreading. I think it’s SO important and such a crucial part of writing. Just one word can change the entire meaning and interpretation of a statement. For example, I’ve learned that when stating my opinion, I shouldn’t use too many words and be firm in what I say. Newswriting is similar in that meaning gets lost in wordiness.
Grammar mistakes are also a problem. I can’t take anything seriously that has a grammar error like “your” or “you’re” being mixed up.
The best way for me to proofread is write something and read it the next day. At that point, I’ve forgotten most of what I’ve written and can read my work objectively. I also like to read things out loud. I’ve made so many mistakes by just scanning my papers because I only spot really obvious problems.
Helmet Laws
Doctors strongly oppose the Maryland State Legislature consideration to change motorcyclist helmet laws.
Many physicians in Towson are opposed to the bill. About fifty of them held a press conference Monday morning on the front lawn of Memorial Hospital. An audience of over one hundred nurses, paramedics, and other healthcare workers was present. The doctors unveiled a petition to legislators asking them not to pass the bill. Doctors from Johns Hopkins University Hospital, Mercy Hospital and Greater Baltimore Medical Center were present at the press conference.
The doctors have gotten nearly four hundred signatures so far on the petition and hope to have at least five hundred by the time they send it to the legislature.
The number of serious head injuries caused by motorcycle accidents in Maryland is over 70% less now then when the helmet law was adopted 25 years ago, said Dr. Karl Sodergreen. He said that reduction is directly related to passage of the law.
Dr. Hector Rivera said a study from last year about health-care costs related to motorcycle riding by the state medical society showed that emergency room costs alone could go up by more than 45 percent if the helmet law is repealed.
Dr. Sodergreen said the physicians plan to send their petition to the legislature on Monday. The bill is to be considered by the legislature next Wednesday.
Ironically, there was a motorcyclist accident during the press conference. The driver of the vehicle was not wearing his helmet, and the aftermath was available for all to see. This executed the perfect example of why so many medical professionals are against this bill change.
Helmet Laws
Doctors strongly oppose the Maryland State Legislature consideration to change motorcyclist helmet laws.
Many physicians in Towson are opposed to the bill. About fifty of them held a press conference Monday morning on the front lawn of Memorial Hospital. An audience of over one hundred nurses, paramedics, and other healthcare workers was present. The doctors unveiled a petition to legislators asking them not to pass the bill. Doctors from Johns Hopkins University Hospital, Mercy Hospital and Greater Baltimore Medical Center were present at the press conference.
The doctors have gotten nearly four hundred signatures so far on the petition and hope to have at least five hundred by the time they send it to the legislature.
The number of serious head injuries caused by motorcycle accidents in Maryland is over 70% less now then when the helmet law was adopted 25 years ago, said Dr. Karl Sodergreen. He said that reduction is directly related to passage of the law.
Dr. Hector Rivera said a study from last year about health-care costs related to motorcycle riding by the state medical society showed that emergency room costs alone could go up by more than 45 percent if the helmet law is repealed.
Dr. Sodergreen said the physicians plan to send their petition to the legislature on Monday. The bill is to be considered by the legislature next Wednesday.
Ironically, there was a motorcyclist accident during the press conference. The driver of the vehicle was not wearing his helmet, and the aftermath was available for all to see. This executed the perfect example of why so many medical professionals are against this bill change.
Revised Lede
Towson students say they are more willing to use credit cards on food and alcohol after they have been drinking.
Two Ledes I Liked
I really like Annie’s lede a lot. It directly relates to me, which is a big flashing light for me. I’m also really interested in what she finds out about how onecards relate to college credit card debt. I can’t wait to read her story!
I also really liked Danielle’s lede. I think the fact that she created Debt 101 was catchy and kind of funny. She made the lede really tie both topics together.
Source Ideas
I definitely have some ideas about who I’d like to talk to for my interview. I have a little bit of an advantage because of my job. My boss is actually the owner of Pizans, so I can go straight to the top and not get second hand information from a manager. We also see so many different customers, and I would like to ask a college student and an adult their opinions on my thought and direction of my newsstory.
I also want to talk to a bank representative. I think I’m going to go to a bank near my house because I’m sure a lot of people are going to talk to the people at Chevy Chase in the Union, and I’d like an opinion of someone that doesn’t work directly with students.
Monday, March 24, 2008
Feature stories can vary in length, from fairly long to fairly short. They have a lot more descriptive words, which is something I like (I have that problem with my news writing, so this should be a little bit easier for me :))
I paid special attention to each of the leads in the stories. I especially liked the Shake, Rattle and Sell lead. The entire story was told in a really vivid way, and it all started right at the very beginning. I could picture what was going on the whole time. I don't even like baseball, but now I'm in the mood to go to a game and pig out. I also had no idea how hard these people work. It's pretty obvious that they're carrying around a bunch of food, but 20-40 pounds is a lot more than I thought. The imagery in the story allowed me to imagine myself trying to carry that much food up and down stadium stairs for hours, and it gave me an appreciation for how hard these guys work.
The bottom line of each story isn't exactly important, but that's what feature stories are all about. Feature stories are able to make a big deal out of something that could be told in a few sentences. They can be biographical, like the lemonade guy's story, or they can just tell a cute story, like the girl and her recovered wedding ring.
Sunday, February 24, 2008
Sunday, February 17, 2008
Credit Card Debt
I talked to a girl that I work with who isn't exactly in debt, but she does have a little bit of outstanding money owed to her credit card company. It frustrates her because she wants to pay off the bill, but she slowly but surely continues to dig herself a deeper hole. When she gets a paycheck, she spends it on bills. She's pretty much stuck between a rock and a hard place.
For my news story, I want to talk about how even if students get themselves in debt, it isn't just because of irresponsibility. Sure, there are students out there who spend their money like it grows on trees and then complain about the bill later, but there are also those students who pay for everything themselves and find it difficult to balance everything.
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Credit Card Debt
Saturday, February 2, 2008
Oh No They Didn't!
Wednesday, January 30, 2008
Newsrooms use Google Maps to improve wildfire coverage
While the blog entry I recently posted with my own mad is an example of convergence journalism, it isn't quite as effective because not as many people are reading it. Either way, I am still writing and publishing an article and the public can view it. Of course, only my classmates will benefit from my post because my peers' residential locations aren't exactly a prime interest of the rest of the country.